Writing IVc Exams

I will suggest you three steps to success Writing IV. That are easy suggestions.
First you must practice typing. It is important to you to writing more and more. Typing practice is not difficult. Just write your thoughts. Take it easy!!!
Second, you must learn English words, so you can write everything what you want to write. If you don't know words, you will not blog.
Third, you must to write everything in your blog, there are many people that read your blog. The reader give you comments. You will see the comment and you will have many thinking points.

This suggestions are very important. Writing IV class is very interesting, so you can enjoy writing blog. Don't afraid of writing. Just writing with joy.
Good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Book Review 2-19 "The Umbrella"

I read "The Umbrella". There is Cala. She bought red umbrella. She likes it. She went to cake shop. In there she was stolen her umbrella. She was angry. But she met a young man named Pail. They went to coffee shop and talk and talk. They become good friends.
I have an umbrella but I don't like it. Because it is cheap and made of plastic. I want to buy a new one that I like. I think from I read this book.
(84 words)

Book Review 2-18 "MAISIE AND THE DOLPHIN"

I read "MAISIE AND THE DOLPHIN".
There is Maisie. She lives inthe Bahamas. Her parents are doctor. On Saturdays, Maisie and her grandfather often go out in his boat. One day, they saw an american boat hits dolphin. They took the dolphin to her parents'shospital named Freeport. After his remedy, Maisie and the dolphin named Ben are getting along with each other. But Ben is good now, he must go home in the sea. She decided to say goodbye to Ben. He went back to sea, but she found he has got something in his mouth. it was key of gold box. And then Maisie become happy girl.
I think it is like a repay of dolphin. This story was very cute story. I think it is interesting.
(128 words)

Book Review 2-17 "THE LAST PHOTO"

I read "THE LAST PHOTO". This story was bit interesting. There are Pam and Martin. They went to Cambridge and took many pictures. When they took the last picture, the man across between them and they couldn't succeed take a picture. The picture showed the man. They were angry. Someday, they discovered the man is the criminal. They notified the policeman. Their story was in all newspapers. They are good woman and man.
I think Martin's discovery was very good. It is good at last. But I think why she like take a picture.
(94 words)

LIVE

I went to Angela Aki's live on January 14.
It was very good live to me. Her voice was very very beautiful.
I become I like her!!!
I want to go her live again♪
(34 words)

Lantern Festival

I'm going to go to Nagasaki Lantern Fetival with Haruka.
I'm looking forward to going there.
(16 words)

Book Review 2-16 "THE LEOPARD AND THE LIGHTHOUSE"

I read "THE LEOPARD AND THE LIGHTHOUSE".
There is an islandnamed Sindi in East Atrica. This island is a very nice place. One day, a leopard swim across the sea to Sindi. He is very hungry and walks along the road to the village. In the villafe, there are many people and appear leopard, everyone surprised and they throw stones at him and he runs. The people follow him. At last, the leopard reached building named lighthouse. He stayed there for three days. But the accident doesn't solve. Finally, the head man of Sindi named Mohammed decided, if someone kill the leopard, the man can be marry with Tanza. Many men challenged, but can't kill the leopard. At last one young man succeede and marry with Tanza.
I think I want to know the feeling of the leopard. Then, this story is more interesting story.
(145 words)

Book Review 2-15 "THE FIREBOY"

There is Hapu. He lives in Ancient Egypt at the time of Queen Cleopatra. He works with his father. They make gold tables and chairs. One day, his father become ill. Hapu is very shocked. But he has a nice idea that make beautiful necklace for Queen Cleopatra. He has no chance to give it for her. But chance has come. He give it for her, soon she likes it. He get money. He think he live happy with father, but Queen asked him to work her palace. He explained about his father. Queen approved to work with his father. And they become rich.
This book is easy to read. Hapu is a good boy. So, he was reworded. This story is very good story.
(125 words)

My and my sister's birthday

My birthday and my sister's birthday is near. So, at home, our birthday party hold same day. My mother bought us cake. Thank you mother!!
It was very delicious.
(29 words)

Birthday

On January 22, this day was okadasan's birthday. My part-time job's member cereblate his birthday. He was surprised when he looked this cake.
Happy Birthday to Okadasan!!!!
(27 words)

Omu Carry

I made this. This name is "Omu Carry". It is easy to make.
It was very delicious. I ate all.
(20 words)

Part time job's member

This picture is my part-time job's member.
They are always kind to me. So, I like them.
(17 words)

My Birthday

January 19th was my birthday. I am 20 years old.
I want to become massive woman.
This day was very good day. Many friends sent me birthday messages, and at my part-time job's menbers hold birthday party for me. I was very very glad. I cried with glad.
I gave birthday presents and we ate birthday cake. It was delicious!!
Thank you everyone. I love everyone☆
(67 words)

FALL TEST

Test has started.
I'm going to study hard, maybe...
(9 words)

Alumni Association

The other day, I went to junior high school alumni association.
I met many friends after a long srparation. I took many pictures.
Everyone drunk alcohole.
I had very good time.
(31 words)

Test

Test is coming soon. I don't study. So I will study very hard from today.
I'll do my best!!!!
(19 words)

Ouchi Caffe 2

I went to Ouchi Caffe with Hiroko and Abechan.
I ate Omu cheese carry. This is delicious. By the way, This carry has many vegitables. For example, Tomato, Pumpkin, Potato eggplant. I don't like eggplant, but I ate. It was so so. I could eat!
I went to go there again!!!
(51 words)

Congratulation

My coming of age day, I went to my part time job's place to show my Kimono.
Then, my part time job's member treat me this.
This is Noko shokora. It was very delicious, but bit sweet.
Thank you Hashiguchi san☆
(42 words)

Coming of Age Day

This is my coming of age day's picture.
That day was very very nice day. I met many friends and took many pictures.
This day was my precious day.
(29 words)

Shun Oguri

I like Shun Oguri. He is 26 years old. He is actor. His performance is very good.
He is very cool. Now, he is very popular among young people.
(29 words)

GYAN

I went to shopping with Hiroko.
We went to many shops, but I bought only short pants.
At lunch time, we went to GYAN. I went to there for the first time. This restaurant was small but tastes very good. And volume was good! I want to go there again.
(50 words)

Coffee

I went to Yume Town with my mother on Jan.19. There were many people in there.
We bought grab bags.
We were tired, so we went to caffe. It was delicious.
(31 words)

J CAFFE

I went to J CAFFE with Megumi and Emi. It was first time I went to there. I drunk caramel rate. It was not sweet but delicious!!!
I want to there again.
(32 words)

The Sweetest Thing

I watched "The Sweetest Thing".
I like Cameron Diaz, so I rentaled this movie. She was very cute in this movie. So, everyone like her. The movies content was so so. This is not that I like. I like more romanic movie. I want look for the best movie.
(49 words)

The Princess Dialies

I watched "The Princess Dialies".
This movie was very interesting. First, heroine was not cute and beautifull, but finally, she is chenge cute and beauty girl.
I want to be like her.
(32 words)

7 gatu 24 kka doorino Christmas

I watched this movie. I think this movie is so so.
All the characters are very nice.
Miki Nakatani is very beautiful woman!!! I like her☆
(27 words)

Typing

Typing is difficult to me. Because I don’t have power of writing. But now I’m practice typing in my writing class. Spring semester, I didn’t write I had expected. So, I will practice. Now, I write more than spring semester. I thought typing is very difficult, but gradually I think it is interesting. When I heard 5 minutes, I think 5 minutes is long, but when I doing typing test, I think 5 minutes is very short.

I think it is difficult to writing that I think. But I will practice more and more. I want to write 200 words in 5 minutes.
(103 words)

Good morning!

Good morning!
I work up very very early.
(8 words)

Book Review 2-14 "Dino's Day in London"

I read "Dino's Day in London".
Tommy is a taxi driver. He appointer a driver for Gloria Brash's son. Gloria is movie star.
He took her son everywhere, but her son Dino is haughty. Tommy was very angry. But he was told his boss, "Be very nice to the boy". He sndured. But.....the boy he guided was different boy. He was mistaken. He was very sorry......
(66 words)

Book Review 2-13 "ANITA'S BIG DAY"

I read "ANITA'S BIG DAY".
This story was not interesting, I think.
But I think it is good for woman and man. Because both of two become movie star. Dan is a very dangerous driver. For example, he drive on footbridge, airport and so on. Everything where he drive were dangerous.
I think I'm glad because this story ended in happy end.
(62 words)

Writing IVc: Portfolio

Writing IVc: Portfolio
(See: Note 1, below)

0.0. Overview

Reviews, Posts, and Words

(See: Note 2, below.)

Months	08	09	10	11	12	01	Totals	fn	Indices
Book reviews	0	0	7	2	0	10	19
Blog posts	0	2	23	20	17	41	103
Words	0	0				1795	2061
TOTAL	---	---	---	---	---	---	---	---

1.0. Essays

(See: Note 3, below)

1.1. Showcase	Short titles [+ links]	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	¶	W	C	L	P	M	Notes
Mega- essay 07.10.12	Mega Essay	07.10.10	14	849	5	2	1	0
Favorite place(-s) 07.10.26	My favorite place	07.10.26	7	178	0	0	2	0
Movie review 07.11.11	Movie Review 2-01	07.11.11	5	295	4	1	1	0
Community life 07.11.25	Community life	07.11.25	6	302	1	0	0	0
TV in Japan 07.12.09	5 essay: TV	07.12.05	6	320	0	0	0	0
Learning w/ computers 07.12.21	Learning with computers	07. 12.21	6	391	0	0	0	0
Totals	---	---	44	2335	10	3	4	0	---

Key:

¶: number of paragraphs three or more sentences in length

W: number of words

C: number of comments

L: number of links

P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included

1.2. Best Essay

Selection and Assessment: Which of those essays do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best essay, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
  

2.0. Comments

Showcase	Titles of posts with links	Dates of comments (yy.mm.dd)	Numbers of words in comments	Qualities of comments**
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog*	Wow! Get a Load of These Demographics.	07.12.19	44	so so
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog*	Learning with computers	08.01.09	19	so so
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog*	7 gatsu 24 kka dorino Chiristmas	08.01.16	9	so so
2.4. Most comments on:	Titles of posts with link	Dates of posts (yy.mm.dd)	Total number of words in comments	Qualities of comments*
2.4.1. Any one of your essays*	MOVIE REVIEW 2-01 "TOY STORY"	07.11.11	25	good
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---	No	---	---
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---	No	bad
2.4.2. Any of your other posts*
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments?	---		---	---
2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments?	---	---

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* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post.

2.5. Recent comments display

Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where or why not?

• I don't know.
  

2.6. Additional reflections on comments

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; write out your reflections on giving and receiving comments here.]
  

3.0. Typing Speed Trials

Showcase	Numbers of words	Dates (yy.mm.dd)
3.1. Worst typing speed trial*	71	07.10.17
3.2. Best typing speed trial*	127	07.12.19
3.3. Improvement (best minus worst)		---
3.4. Average speed for three (3) most recent speed trials**	105

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* Current semester typing speed trials (five minutes)
** Please list all three dates.

4.0. Book Reviews

4.1. Showcase	Short titles with links	Dates (yy.mm.dd)	Words	Comments
Example:	Vampire Killer	07.05.16	39	1
2-01	MaRceL and The WhiTe STaR	07.10.10	48	0
2-02	FLYING HOME	07.10.10	73	0
2-03	Two boy friends	07.10.11	76	0
2-04	The Blue Cat Club	07.10.11	47	0
2-05	Karen and the ARTIST	07.10.16	54	0
2-06	A NEW ZEALAND ADVENTURE	07.10.23	58	2
2-07	Carnival	07.10.23	42	0
2-08	Newspaper Chase	07.11.12	90	0
2-09	The Big Bag Mistake	07.11.26	144	0
2-10	BETWEEN TWO WORLDS	08.01.08	123	0
2-11	Shooting Stars	08.01.08	125	0
2-12	MaRCeL and The Mona Lisa	08.01.08	53	0
2-13	ANITA'S BIG DAY	08.01.13	62	0
2-14	Dino's Day in London	08.01.13	66	0
2-15	THE FIREBOY	08.01.29	125	0
2-16	THE LEOPARD AND THE LIGHTHOUSE	08.01.29	145	0
2-17	THE LAST PHOTO	08.01.29	94	0
2-18	MAISIE AND THE DOLPHIN	08.01.29	128	0
2-19	The Umbrella	08.01.29	84	0
---	---	TOTALS:	1676

Note: Please calculate book review words and comments totals without the example (above).

4.2. Best Book Review

Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Please remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.

• [Remove square brackets, including these remarks; identify your best book review, and write out reasons for selecting it here.]
• I like 2-18 is the best. It was very cute story and easy to read.

5.0. Blog Layout, Labeling, Linking, & Media

Showcase	Yes	No
5.1. Does your blog have an archive?	Y
5.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts?	Y
5.1.2. Is the archive organized by month?	Y
5.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar?	Y
5.2. Does your blog have labels displayed in sidebar?	Y
5.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately):	---	---
"books" (plural) AND "reviews" (plural)	Y
"essays" (plural) AND "portfolios" (plural, without "proto-")	Y
"quickposts" (plural, with no space between quick and posts)	Y
"links" (plural) AND "media" (plural)	Y
"movies" (plural) AND "photos" (plural)	Y
5.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels?	Y
How many other labels have you attached to three (3) or more posts? __5_ other labels attached to three or more posts	---	---
Which labels, and to how many posts each? Please list those labels instead of www, xxx, yyy..., and list numbers of posts instead of n, m, o... (in parentheses), below. Labels quickposts (82) Photos (67) ｂookｓ (25) media (14) essays (13) links (13) Sweets (11) portfolios (6) Music (4) Movies (3) Omulet rice (3) School life (1) reviews (1)	---	---
5.3. Links & media	---	---
5.3.1. Does your blog include pictures or other graphics?	Y
Does your blog profile include a picture or graphic representation?	Y
How many of your blog posts this semester include pictures or other graphics? ___ posts including pictures or other graphics	---	---
5.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links?	Y
How many of your posts this semester include three (3) or more links?* ___ posts including three or more links (including this portfolio!)	---	---
5.3.3. Does your blog include other media?	Y
How many of your blog posts this semester include other media? _14__ posts including other media	---	---
What kind(-s) of media have you included in posts this semester? Please list them here: Pictures ... ...	---	---

5.4. Overall presentation

What have you done to enhance the overall presentation of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes or enhancements that you have made on your blog this semester.

1. It is need to easy to look.
2. I must study grammar more and more.
3. I must write interesting topics.

6.0. Additional reflections on your blog writing

• I don't know this sentence.

7.0. Suggestions for your peers and successors

• You have to write enjoy!!!

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Notes:

1. This portfolio template amplifies the template for Writing IIIc portfolios.
2. The overview section (0.0. Overview, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-01.
3. This essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derives from Proto-Portfolio 2-02.

Bonars Caffe

I went to Bonars Caffe to eat lunch with Miku.
I ate alternate days menu.
This is desert with lunch.
(20 words)

Cake.....

I went to SWISS to eat cake with Shoko and Namu.
We didn't cut this cake. We ate with only spoon.
It was very very delicious!!!
(26 words)

Dinner

I went to MA-MA-FU-FU- to eat dinner with Shoko and Miku.
We ate very much and talked a lot.
We had a good time♪
(24 words)

Cristmas Cake in Joyfull

I ate Christmas Cake in part-time job place.
This is very delicious.
And I drunk champagne.
(16 words)

Santa Claus

On Cristmas Eve, I had part time job.
But I'm happy, because Santa Claus came to my job place.



He is my par time job's member.(Hahaha~
(26 words)

Christmas Cake at home

This is my Christmas Cake. I bought it from Santa pre. It is bit small but very delicious.
I like shortcake♪
(22 words)

Book Review 2-12 "MaRCeL and The Mona Lisa"

I read "MaRCeL and The Mona Lisa". I read MaRceL's book series before. I like this series of book.
Marcel is a French mouse and he is a defective. He always solve the incident.
He is a mouse but he is wiser better than human. I like his personality. He is good mouse.
(53 words)

Book Review 2-11 "Shiiting Stars"

I read "Shooting Stars". It was written by Polly Sweetnam.
Alice and Lisa went to Greece in their holiday. They had a good time in there. In the museum they heard good news about their favorite movie stars. Next day, they decided to meet them. Alice is not hotel, and Lisa is in balcony. Suddenly, she find two people. They are shouting each other. Then, she realized the two people are her favorite star's Claudia and Matt. Watching their quarrel, Lisa was afraid. Then Claudia shoot gun to Matt. Lisa thought Matt was dead. But this scene was practice of the movie. She was just mistake.
This story is interesting story. I was surprised this story's end. I think this story was end of happy.
(125 words)

Book Review 2-10 "BETWEEN TO WORLDS"

I read "BETWEEN TWO WORLDS".
Joanna Jimbuku is a nurse. She works with Bob. He is a flying doctor. They always flying to remedy somewhere. One day, the call on their office, then they fly to named Mary. She is eight months baby. Because of her ill, Joanna took Mary to Sydney's hospital. Mary was not bad but she is good in several days. Joanna intended to go to her office, then she was asked
from Dr.clark, "Please work in this hospital." She was glad but to work there is not her hope. She go back her office and work with Bob.
This book was interesting. I understand how Joanna is kind woman. She is a nice nurse. I'm glad because Mary's recovery.
(123 words)

Koisuru recipe

I watched "Koisuru recipe. When I went to TSUTAYA, I found this movie. Why I decided to rental this movie, because this movie's hero was Matthew MaConaughey. I like him. The movie coutent was so so. But all the character were very nice.
(43 words)