I will suggest you three steps to success Writing IV. That are easy suggestions.
First you must practice typing. It is important to you to writing more and more. Typing practice is not difficult. Just write your thoughts. Take it easy!!!
Second, you must learn English words, so you can write everything what you want to write. If you don't know words, you will not blog.
Third, you must to write everything in your blog, there are many people that read your blog. The reader give you comments. You will see the comment and you will have many thinking points.
This suggestions are very important. Writing IV class is very interesting, so you can enjoy writing blog. Don't afraid of writing. Just writing with joy.
Good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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2008年1月30日水曜日
2008年1月29日火曜日
Book Review 2-19 "The Umbrella"
I read "The Umbrella". There is Cala. She bought red umbrella. She likes it. She went to cake shop. In there she was stolen her umbrella. She was angry. But she met a young man named Pail. They went to coffee shop and talk and talk. They become good friends.
I have an umbrella but I don't like it. Because it is cheap and made of plastic. I want to buy a new one that I like. I think from I read this book.
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I have an umbrella but I don't like it. Because it is cheap and made of plastic. I want to buy a new one that I like. I think from I read this book.
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Book Review 2-18 "MAISIE AND THE DOLPHIN"
I read "MAISIE AND THE DOLPHIN".
There is Maisie. She lives inthe Bahamas. Her parents are doctor. On Saturdays, Maisie and her grandfather often go out in his boat. One day, they saw an american boat hits dolphin. They took the dolphin to her parents'shospital named Freeport. After his remedy, Maisie and the dolphin named Ben are getting along with each other. But Ben is good now, he must go home in the sea. She decided to say goodbye to Ben. He went back to sea, but she found he has got something in his mouth. it was key of gold box. And then Maisie become happy girl.
I think it is like a repay of dolphin. This story was very cute story. I think it is interesting.
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There is Maisie. She lives inthe Bahamas. Her parents are doctor. On Saturdays, Maisie and her grandfather often go out in his boat. One day, they saw an american boat hits dolphin. They took the dolphin to her parents'shospital named Freeport. After his remedy, Maisie and the dolphin named Ben are getting along with each other. But Ben is good now, he must go home in the sea. She decided to say goodbye to Ben. He went back to sea, but she found he has got something in his mouth. it was key of gold box. And then Maisie become happy girl.
I think it is like a repay of dolphin. This story was very cute story. I think it is interesting.
(128 words)
Book Review 2-17 "THE LAST PHOTO"
I read "THE LAST PHOTO". This story was bit interesting. There are Pam and Martin. They went to Cambridge and took many pictures. When they took the last picture, the man across between them and they couldn't succeed take a picture. The picture showed the man. They were angry. Someday, they discovered the man is the criminal. They notified the policeman. Their story was in all newspapers. They are good woman and man.
I think Martin's discovery was very good. It is good at last. But I think why she like take a picture.
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I think Martin's discovery was very good. It is good at last. But I think why she like take a picture.
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LIVE
I went to Angela Aki's live on January 14.
It was very good live to me. Her voice was very very beautiful.
I become I like her!!!
I want to go her live again♪
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It was very good live to me. Her voice was very very beautiful.
I become I like her!!!
I want to go her live again♪
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Lantern Festival
I'm going to go to Nagasaki Lantern Fetival with Haruka.
I'm looking forward to going there.
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I'm looking forward to going there.
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Book Review 2-16 "THE LEOPARD AND THE LIGHTHOUSE"
I read "THE LEOPARD AND THE LIGHTHOUSE".
There is an islandnamed Sindi in East Atrica. This island is a very nice place. One day, a leopard swim across the sea to Sindi. He is very hungry and walks along the road to the village. In the villafe, there are many people and appear leopard, everyone surprised and they throw stones at him and he runs. The people follow him. At last, the leopard reached building named lighthouse. He stayed there for three days. But the accident doesn't solve. Finally, the head man of Sindi named Mohammed decided, if someone kill the leopard, the man can be marry with Tanza. Many men challenged, but can't kill the leopard. At last one young man succeede and marry with Tanza.
I think I want to know the feeling of the leopard. Then, this story is more interesting story.
(145 words)
There is an islandnamed Sindi in East Atrica. This island is a very nice place. One day, a leopard swim across the sea to Sindi. He is very hungry and walks along the road to the village. In the villafe, there are many people and appear leopard, everyone surprised and they throw stones at him and he runs. The people follow him. At last, the leopard reached building named lighthouse. He stayed there for three days. But the accident doesn't solve. Finally, the head man of Sindi named Mohammed decided, if someone kill the leopard, the man can be marry with Tanza. Many men challenged, but can't kill the leopard. At last one young man succeede and marry with Tanza.
I think I want to know the feeling of the leopard. Then, this story is more interesting story.
(145 words)
Book Review 2-15 "THE FIREBOY"
There is Hapu. He lives in Ancient Egypt at the time of Queen Cleopatra. He works with his father. They make gold tables and chairs. One day, his father become ill. Hapu is very shocked. But he has a nice idea that make beautiful necklace for Queen Cleopatra. He has no chance to give it for her. But chance has come. He give it for her, soon she likes it. He get money. He think he live happy with father, but Queen asked him to work her palace. He explained about his father. Queen approved to work with his father. And they become rich.
This book is easy to read. Hapu is a good boy. So, he was reworded. This story is very good story.
(125 words)
This book is easy to read. Hapu is a good boy. So, he was reworded. This story is very good story.
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2008年1月24日木曜日
My and my sister's birthday
Birthday
Omu Carry
My Birthday
January 19th was my birthday. I am 20 years old.
I want to become massive woman.
This day was very good day. Many friends sent me birthday messages, and at my part-time job's menbers hold birthday party for me. I was very very glad. I cried with glad.
I gave birthday presents and we ate birthday cake. It was delicious!!
Thank you everyone. I love everyone☆
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2008年1月23日水曜日
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